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Never stop dreaming, 'cause the day you stop dreaming, is the day you stop living.

Editing, editing, and… more editing!

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Yep. The title is pretty much the reason for my somewhat irregular blog posts as of late. I’m knee-deep in editing the first draft of Silent Spirit.

This morning, I forced my way through chapters 16 through 21. That took a big chunk out of what I’ve got left to do and put me on track again, since I fell behind for a while. My goal? February 28th.

What’s left? Chapters 22 through 29, plus an epilogue.

The end is near.

Now, let’s see if I can make my brain function again before I need to work in a few hours, after all that editing turned it to mush.

That’ll be interesting.

And here, have a tiny snippet!

“I’d like to speak with the manager, please.”

“Are you certain that’s who you’re here to speak to?”

The smooth voice came from my right and my left fist clenched instinctively. Familiar, oh so familiar; Kieran spoke with a distinctive noble tone that crept under my skin like skittering insects. After one slow breath, I turned to the right.

Kieran descended one of the spiral staircases, one hand running along the railing. The purple cape he wore brushed just beneath his rear, shifting with every step. His smile didn’t seem like a smile, but more a predatory leer masked with manners.

“What a pleasant surprise.” He reached the bottom of the staircase and waved a hand in the other man’s direction. “Dismissed.”

“Yes, milord.” The employee bowed his head and quickly left the room.

I now stood alone in the room with Kieran, who wore that same predatory smile as he approached me.

Let me know in the comments what you think! Have a great weekend, everyone. 🙂

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Author: Natasha McNeely

I'm a writer, a reader, a gamer and a dreamer. I love losing myself to thought and considering possibilities. That is how I create my stories and weave the erratic tales into readable ones.

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